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divine interrogation
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divine interrogation |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How can I love him? I toss the crystals-- query gods I had forgot. My answer comes, spelt out in rocks: "How is it, you can NOT?" *sorry for the quick edit of typos...sigh...what izzit with me and midnight? all hell breaks loose...  [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-06-2002 01:49 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
after reading the last line the first gains new meaning  b |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Would it be terribly politically incorrect of me to state my amusement that this is based on an actual event here. I did indeed, "toss the stones" in this query, and did indeed "receive" that response. And? my first reaction, when receiving this question as an answer was? "Oy Vay! GOD IS JEWISH!!!" (love you bri...)  with 's to all... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Perhaps midnight is the time between.... like the poem...and especially your comment about god.... I always thought god must be a woman.... who else has that sort of sense of humor???? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ya know? The title had me thinkin' that you had suffered a "grilling" at the hands our very own "devina". I really liked this little bijou, Karenity. ~Ed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A superb title and a better work  1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Interesting! I like the pondering in this. Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just knew, by the way this poem was written, that it was based on a real experience. Enjoyed this little piece of reality writing. Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all...and Ed? smiling here, I thought of that after I posted it...but? Sharon doesn't have to interrogate me...most of the time? she can't get me to shut up!!! but this one was fun--I finally opened a christmas present--my brother had forgotten to give it to me...chuckling...it was rather dusty, and sort of full of coffee stains and ashes by the time he gave it to me just yesterday, and inside was this little divination kit-- see? Ya'll think I'm crazy? You should meet the family!  Hugs to all with thanks. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I don't think you're crazy I'm quite intrigued by it all!! haha *whispers* you'd probably think I was crazy for half of the stuff I do and believe in..but each is own  loved it tho! Kristen |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah, but who's to say the gods aren't indifferent? They sure change whims quickly. Mike |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You do have the touch, but I'm never sure what is going to happen. Enjoyed.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Here dark witch toss the bones and let's see what indeed indifferent gods have to say on this. I would not laugh so easily at unknowing eyes to cause them to turn a glare instead of glance So toss the bones I would see them dance on hardpacked earth before I in turn dance under it |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved that, Ron. Will you post it in Dark? |
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