Open Poetry #22 |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
Sometimes I can be too hard on myself And at other times I Want to take on the world And tell people off Isn't there a divine median Where tranquility And choas interjoin For once in my life Sometimes I feel so alone That it hurts And sometimes I slam the door Sit in my corner Reaching out for Angels To soothe this aching pain Crying, pleading To why at times I can be so naive And yet still Sometimes My friends compliment me Telling me how Sparkly And bubbly I tend to be Funny how I'm a walking contradiction Lost in my own little world And amazes me How it all seems to surpass me And how blind I can really be.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, I understand this feeling so well too, but know you are a very special person and we all love you so much and nothing can change that! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a very sensitive heartfelt write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But so very well written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I think we all can be too hard on ourselves at times. I know I am. We should accept the compliments of others and try to understand that not every day can be perfect. Well done. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ceinwyn Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wouldn't it be nice if we could see each ourselves as others see us... A very enjoyable write, Kristin. ![]() Lyra |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
dear Ceinwyn, wow, this one went straight to my heart. terrific. Annie:- "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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