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This Text of Masks..................................BSQ's challenge
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This Text of Masks..................................BSQ's challenge |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 This text of masks the façade unraveled, a manuscript of clues left behind the play of thoughts on how to disentangle what had been here in my there before the challenge… for here in my there had been the play of this gorgeous cloud filled day, the gray-in-blue-on-white pillowed puffs of stuff from which images are formed, oh heavens, the height and breadth of them, their voluminous unfoldings, billowing before me, telling me all manner of men need to make out of nothing, something, and therefore, form images which brings God that much closer to me in my mind… for in His image, am I… and then and now, to weave into the beauty of these formations, is formed the challenge, this text of masks and I draw my here in there, into His performance upon upper portions of these billowing, gaseous formulations of ionic manipulations, pushing here, carving there, curves so voluptuous that the bas relief of it all is what I see…. an angel in flight, a man loving a woman, a lone dog gone mad a lion in hunt a text of masks in my here of there gone wild ~*~ Mikey...you're a gem, and the challenge....was not easy....hope you enjoy!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, the challenge may not be easy, but you make it seem so easy, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Yes, always look up and let your mind and soul rest and unravel all those masks of thoughts in porcelain and glass that reflect your face of the heart! (smiles) This is excellent, I'm adding this to my library because it is so good, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea..your cloud does have faces..the second one frightened me. A beautiful poem for this challange. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine---this was masterfully done, and full of caring. Mikey can't help but enjoy it!--I certainly did! Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
THIS-- an angel in flight, a man loving a woman, a lone dog gone mad a lion in hunt a text of masks in my here of there gone wild IS BEAUTIFUL. and the rest was so subtly clever... can I please bow out of this challenge now? I'm outta my league...groan... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea...this is so beautiful!! Challenge well met! I'm not even going to attempt this one. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is beautifully done... much enjoyed... regards, sudhir |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So well done! Thrilling to see what I have felt put to words. Thanks Sunshine. ThisDiamond |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such a well crafted response... bravo my friend! excellent! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Karilea, If my jaw drops any farther, it will end up doubling back into the sky, among those clouds. Eloquent, beautiful, rain-laden (without the rain) work. Hm, this one really *is* a challenge.... And you took it home. Mikey |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - All I can say is WOW !! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari, I don't even have the words for this but might I ask....... please teach me!!! There are no words for this beauty, into the treasure box it goes! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
This is such a gem and a keeper. You certainly honor the Creator of His art noveau....I adore clouds and am fortunate to see them often ...billowing by with faces. You met your challenge so very perfectly and have a wonderful work of art to add to your artful collection, Cher Poetry is: |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
into His performance upon upper portions of these billowing, gaseous formulations of ionic manipulations, pushing here, carving there, curves so voluptuous that the bas relief of it all is what I see…. WOW Karliea, what a rush a beauty images. A wonderful write.  Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVA! AUTHOR! BRAVA! Are you now "the wild thing?" Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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