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To, too, two, too many
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To, too, two, too many |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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One small step One giant ............leap into the world unknown. One heart one mind one life one word one touch many decisions too many thoughts and not enough time to think. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You don't have enough time to think????--- Can't tell that by your writing! Your poetic brain seems to be working just fine! I know the feeling---you hit the nail on the head with this write. Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I dunno, sometimes I think it's best not to think, spur of the moment is good for me most times |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Linda, fortunately, I do have enough time, in fact...probably more than I need...HA! Writing a feel poem for a friend who is experiencing the crunch of time and decisions... Such a struggle this can be.. Thanx Linda... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dixie....why is it that this surprises me NOT! Hello my shadow who bumps me in the nite... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Barry, I know just how you feel, and translating thoughts into decisions and answers is critical and that is what makes everything so complicated right now! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerful point, sweet friend, you speak with pure crystal wisdom, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
very very clever write.. aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart what is this doing so far down the list? Have the PiP’s people lost their taste? Or is it simply that there are too many poems and not enough time. Very likely because everyone knows you are a superb writer. Or if they don’t they really don’t have any taste. This is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of your perfection you then write something that is so perfect and full of beauty I find myself saying this is incredible. Yet again I’m scampering in here late and tardy, do you miss me when my visits are a little erratic as they are right now. I’m so busy organising things for our visit to Florida that I’ve barely got time to ummmmm sneeze. But I try to get in here for the refreshment of my soul, and to answer you. It is always worth while seeking you out darling heart, and this is exquisite writing, thank you for writing it, truly perfect I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two, to go, for it is, too, an opportunity and an unknown... too much? too soon? to little is known but the adventure? Too much! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
enjoyed the poem can relate to your comment to Linda...the too much time to think part, hehe thinking can get one into or out of trouble, but I think the too much time side is the into side  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You are a quick learner and dance very well. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry...This is wonderful! Love the way your words dance down the page in this one! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
two to tango is too beautiful to miss Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hmmmm...I'll have to think about this  Well done dear Magnus. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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