First Rose....First Rise of Dawn...(Duet with White Rose)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-09-10 05:29 PM

Alive with pleasure come to me.
Bring with you love's fantasy.
Touch my lips with passion sweet,
let our hearts in timeless meet.

A drop of wine filled moistened kiss
'pon the shading of eyes in veil.
One word not said thee sorely miss.
A gift of heaven’s earth I hail.

Awake from sleep my injured heart.
Paint with me love's tender art.
A picture soft of our desire.
A masterpiece of romance fire.

As raging torrents sound the roar
of crimson to the veins in haste.
As eyes of passion flying soar
in clouds of cotton rolling graced.

Stay into the dark of midnight's home.
Make of this moment ours alone.
With words poetic speak of love,
capture me with the silk of touch.

Alone I stand before your eyes
to take from this our meeting first.
To smile and seek from waking sighs,
a want and need, a yearning thirst.

Create memories oh squire of mine
for me to keep gentle on my mind.
Sweet caress on thought engraved
so close to my heart I'll ever save.

Yea, to thy bed I shalt carry
thy heart in roll, thy lovely trace.
Beyond times eternal tarry
whence kisses graze thy lids, thy face

As whispered thoughts become the dawn
of morn in want of slumber's wait.
I lie beside the tender fawn.
Beyond the vale, the waiting fate.

Anne and I collaborated...she led in alternate
stanzas....Thank You Anne, for the moment and
for your beautiful words...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (09-10-2002 05:40 PM).]

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

1 posted 2002-09-10 05:32 PM

enjoyed

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-09-10 05:58 PM

Barry, you took my simple words and made them lovely. You adorned with lace and charm and the poem is wonderful. Thank you for this.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-09-10 06:00 PM

Oh sooooo romantic!

beautiful work, you two!!

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-09-10 06:45 PM

Two excellent poets....
Together, you are absolutely superb!!!

~ lots of chipmunk hugs for both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2002-09-10 06:57 PM

damn beautiful, just damn beautiful is all

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2002-09-10 07:17 PM

you two write graceful romance - lovely work and wonderful poetry - loved it - Paul

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2002-09-10 07:31 PM

A wonderful collaboration from two very fine writers, so very much enjoyed.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-09-10 07:36 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, you two are wonderful, I LOVE THIS, I imagined the gorgeous vale and the rose swaying in the soft breeze, this is beautiful, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-09-10 07:42 PM

Absolutely beautiful...
~Hugs to you both~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2002-09-10 08:44 PM

Magnus, I'm sure that you and White Rose are much, much closer after having collaborated on this sensuous piece.

---Excuse me, I need to take a few minutes to meditate and bring my rapidly beating heart back to normal!

Earth Angel

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Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2002-09-10 08:52 PM

Bravo to you both!! Excellent. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2002-09-10 09:09 PM

Nicely done you both.
Breathy and beautiful.
ThisDiamond

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-09-10 09:24 PM

Anne,  feel free to jump in and comment to
replies....after all, this is half your own
as is mine....  And thank you my Carolina
friend...for being a part of this...

Vandana,  pleased that you enjoyed the write.

Tier, thanx much from me and surely from
WR as well....

Paul,  where have you been hiding...thanx
my friend...or have you changed your name?
Dixie...I do agree...thanx mucho for the
bold reply...

Lyra,  chipper hugs to ya...thanx much
Lady C.

Sue,  thanx from up yonder to down under..
pleased you enjoyed...

Noah,  thanx again my young friend...you are
a treasure to PiP...

Nancy...thanx dear one,  wearing my fave?
When are we gonna write again?

Linda,  thanx, it was fun writing...but
in truth,  very much just what it is..
poetry....

Chris....thanx my dear friend...you and your
sis are too sweet to me...

TD....okay Kathy,
wherefore art thy latest piece of succulent
syllables?  thanx my friend...Gridley

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

14 posted 2002-09-10 09:38 PM

Vandana,  This is the first of these that I have done and I am pleased that you enjoyed.

Tier, I thank you for your response. It was easy to write of romance with someone like Barry.

Dixie, Thanks for the kudos dear friend.

Paul,  Thank you for your reply and I am glad that you enjoyed our duet.

Lyra,  Thank you Madame Chipmunk. This was a wonderful experience for me.

Sue,  Thanks so much, I'm sure you found it was a beautiful undertaking to write with someone as talented as Barry in the art of writing romance.

Noah, Thank you dear Noah. From you such a compliment is an honor for you write of romance so beautifully yourself.

Nancy...Thank you for your response. I enjoyed the write as much as others enjoyed the read.

Linda, This was a joy for me to do. Barry is a very talented writer and he made my words sing in tune with his. And as he said, we are close only in the writing of this piece. And as friends of course.

Chris....Thank you for your the ovation.

ThisDiamond...I'm glad that our words of romance were enjoyed. I appreciate the lovely comment.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

15 posted 2002-09-10 09:42 PM

oh and Barry, it was my pleasure to be a part of this. The end result was truly lovely and a k-e-e-p-e-r.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

16 posted 2002-09-10 10:40 PM

Magnus and WhiteRose---Just a little teasing! I know you are both consumate professionals!

All kidding aside, you did a wonderful collaborative piece of writing! Truly!

EA

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