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Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

0 posted 2002-09-05 08:59 AM

Oh to live forever under stately oaks
A breath of autumn in the air
Treading paths many have traveled
And touching the history there
Sights, sounds and heavenly smells
Senses overloaded, heartbeat overkill
Re-living youth spent wildly
Losing yourself in the childhood thrill
Many memories of a father and son
Treasured images in mind’s eye keep
Above all, marking all that passes,
The sad Spanish moss weeps
Feel the earth upon the hills
What mysteries they may contain
Let the lake waters soothe
And in its voices hear all explained
No other place rivals here in majesty
A heaven amongst mortal sight
I vow to be a ghost when I die
And haunt here every autumn Saturday night

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-09-05 09:02 AM

Wow! I'm with you on that!---literally! You made me feel like I was there---and I enjoyed every minute of it!

Linda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-09-05 09:05 AM

beautiful, so beautiful! I wish I was there.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-05 09:20 AM

This piece is magical!!
You took me....there.
Excellent!
~Magical Morning Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-09-05 09:23 AM

there was a place,
long ago,
in dusky dusty CA
where I wandered 'mong
Spanish moss
where my childhood played
it dusted me
with memories
of what had walked before
leaving me
with history
and footprints at its door...

thank you for the inspire, you are one fine Magician, indeed....

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

5 posted 2002-09-05 02:31 PM

I find it interesting how Autumn invokes a kind of introspection and creates a deep longing of "used to be" that we so lovingly yearn for...very nicely done.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-09-05 03:26 PM

Brings to mind a hunting trip with my Son

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-05 11:09 PM

(smiles) Oh Magician, this is soooooo hauntingly beautiful, I love it, this is an extraordinaey vision, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

8 posted 2002-09-05 11:42 PM

Nicely done my friend, lovely imagery.
P.S. Sorry you don't have e-mail, not easy to call or fax, but does seem we have some common interests. Take care.

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