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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-09-05 12:09 PM

hummingbird dances me
     longer than a breath
Van Gogh verdancy
      in midst of a drought
moon's depth perceived
      better with two
freshly carved lines
      in everything seen

these vivid slices of impossible pie
I could never have
earned
but, she gave them freely
and all I can say
is
I love you

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-05 12:11 PM

This is beautiful and romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-09-05 12:12 PM

brian,
I am currently in the mi(d)st
of a looming depression,
and I just wanted you to know
how much these words touched me...

Mike

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-09-05 12:13 PM

these vivid slices of impossible pie
I could never have
earned
but, she gave them freely
and all I can say
is
I love you.

And you said it wonderfully.

A *sigh* escaped my lips as I read.

No pause, for my eyes saw this, and could do nothing more. Lovely Brian.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-09-05 12:18 PM

Brian

This love, so beautifully explained.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-09-05 12:26 PM

brian doth wax romantic with shimmerbird waltzings and moonpeered musings.

Damn, boy!
I didn't know ya had it in ya.

(do you still have the number for rent-a-muse? (My "Poetry Maker 3.0" software crashes everytime I try to change the "default" to e.e. cummings.)).

~you know who.

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

6 posted 2002-09-05 12:28 PM

loner- thank you
Mike-- buddy, I'm glad
        but hey, write that dark cloud away,
        man. Send a GALE at it! Alright?
Anne-- blush-- thank you, hon
Martie-- I appreciate it very much,
         thank you

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

7 posted 2002-09-05 12:31 PM

well ed?
see, if ya got version 4.0
e.e. comes as default
I usually just use my old standby's