Open Poetry #22 |
In the beginning |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
In the beginning I found her there mingled among her musings. No more than glimpses. A glow from within her poetry compelled consideration. My own thoughts here brought to new life in her own words. Tentative threads of acceptance meet, mingle and twist. Twine into tenuous bond. Binding heart and mind with little more than the strength of strings. Yet, persevered. Pour tu, Etoile Je t'adore ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wranx She is bright, this star...and has touched me also..as does your poem. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
here's to the perseverence of it! like strings... mmmm brian |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very lovely love poem, Wranx... Do wranx's fall in love? ~ hugs from a chipmunk Lyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
C'est bien pour vous et votre etoile. It's been way too long since I've so much as looked at French -- in a book or anywhere. Hence, it's awful. Your poem, however... definitely not. Mekeeey [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-05-2002 12:49 AM).] |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Ed.... This is beautiful...thank you. Any girl would be lucky to have a man like you write such beautiful poems for her...smooches. Sh'teme Heather |
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