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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-09-04 07:37 PM

And Still

I long to be in arms of love
to feel what words can't say.
I long to see the eyes that reach
and touch me in that way.
These simple thoughts can never tell,
can't speak my body's will.
I long, oh how I long to be
in arms around me, still.

I long to kiss those lips of thine
that hold in mystery,
the past of yours that overflows
to bring me close to thee.
I long each moment that I breathe
to share my last with you.
I long, oh how I long to be
so close, within your view.

I long forevers and a day
for wishes to come true.
I long for moments' never end
to always be with you.
At times these rising thoughts can swell
my heart and fill to brim.
I long, oh how long to be
in love, returned by him.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-09-04 07:52 PM

This is a beautiful passionate poem.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-09-04 07:52 PM

So heartfelt and lovely. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-09-04 09:13 PM

This is lovely in all it's longing. Wonderful write M~. I long for the same things and to the world it would seem I have them.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-09-04 10:40 PM

You define the longing to be loved so eloquently Maureen~

I wish that for you!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-09-10 04:43 AM

Fantastic writing...James

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-09-10 12:19 PM

Maureen,
A sad, timeless write.
*hug*

Mike

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2002-09-10 01:14 PM

M

this is beautiful in its longing and intensity...just a lovely write, one we
all can relate to. thanks for the smile
this afternoon

take care
amy

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-09-10 05:22 PM

and still enjoy reading it

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