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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-04 02:15 PM

I see the shades
of leaving again

the dark gray
subdued hues
of unhappiness

draping over
the colors of joy
that once lived here.

They have enveloped
the burst
of rainbow,

now all that remains
is the open door
and the shadow cast
as I walk out.

WhiteRose

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-09-04 02:18 PM

So sad...yet so well said.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-04 02:54 PM

"Now all that remains is the open door, and the shadow cast as I walk out." ...a very powerful image!

Linda

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

3 posted 2002-09-04 04:30 PM

The shades of leaving is such a great expression. And the ending, is sad, powerful, and strengthening all at the same time.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-04 09:30 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, my heart goes out to you, I know this feeling ever so well and I wish for rainbows to brighten your day! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!