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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
autumn’s morning chill grasps ankles, shoulders gently summer’s sun rises Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (09-04-2002 10:45 AM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I like this.... can't write them well but I can recall the feeling of Autumn's chill on my ankles as I made my way to school on crisp fall days... and in the afternoon, coming home how the sun would warm me so gently and reassuringly. Beautiful piece. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Vas, I`m about ready for autum`s chill.We have had some really hot weather here. Juanita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A 'senryu'---so simply stated, and so sweet the images of summer's passing. Thank You Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My kinda piece  Strut your stuff, Virginia |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Virginia, I too am ready for autumn, it has been so hot here and need some breezes, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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