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BldWhtRose
Junior Member

since 2001-09-24

Posts 38
Alabama USA

0 posted 2002-09-04 12:40 PM

Do you know my heartbeat dear
Where my fears go to hide
Where even in my inner soul
What’s hidden here inside
Is but a candles tiny flame
Of hope and love and dreams
For when you’ve given me for lost
My desperate need still screams

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-09-04 12:47 PM

I felt the pain and heartache through your well written words. Very much enjoyed.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

2 posted 2002-09-04 03:57 AM

Great??? I love this...
Keep writting...

Good luck
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-09-04 01:26 PM

Do you know my heartbeat dear
Where my fears go to hide
Where even in my inner soul
What’s hidden here inside
Is but a candles tiny flame
Of hope and love and dreams
For when you’ve given me for lost
My desperate need still screams

This is exceptional. A question, an answer and imagery to paint the picture. Very nice write.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

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