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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-09-04 12:01 PM

I've made a picnic basket
With champagne just for two
We'll lay upon the hillside
And admire the stunning view

As we inhale the salty air
We view the ocean down below
The clouds drift by so slowly
As the tides ebb and flow

A seagull catches the thermals
Looking like he's floating on air
This day is picture perfect
And only you and I are there

The fresh clean air surrounds us
And the sun warms our skin
In just a matter of moments
Our sweet loving will begin

And when the day is over
Just as the moon comes into view
We'll succumb to our desires
And I'll lose myself in you

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-04 12:04 PM

Beautiful descriptions

Cold hands means a warm heart

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-09-04 12:25 PM

reality is so much more complex...nice and romantic though

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

3 posted 2002-09-04 12:57 PM

Oh so beautiful, I crave for such a hillside picnic you've written here, Sue.

marie

Keep counting your blessings

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2002-09-04 03:31 AM

Sue...Such lovely thoughts and words.And the beautiful picture only adds to the lovely poem...Paul

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-09-04 04:49 AM

You are enticing someone...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2002-09-04 06:25 AM

stunning poem and presentation Sue. A wonderful picnic it would be!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2002-09-04 10:01 AM

you write of love and joy so well here - a truly lovely poem from a lovely person - Paul

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-09-04 10:09 AM

Sue, oh this is just lovely! I can close my eyes and picture the scene so clearly. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

9 posted 2002-09-04 06:43 PM

Sue: Cascade Head is such a beautiful spot on the Oregon Coast. I was there just last year, but not in such a romantic situation, unfortunately!

Betty Lou Hebert

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-09-04 07:39 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, I can imagine the sweet seagulls flying around you as you kissed under the sunny skies! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

11 posted 2002-09-13 06:45 PM

this is a great poem I loved it. thank you for sharing.

Andrea

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

12 posted 2002-09-13 07:46 PM

Aww Sue, just looking at the picture is romance enough for me.

Where is my fan?

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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