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Open Poetry #22

How I Dream of You

Doug Pretorius
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 81
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-09-03 06:13 PM

How I Dream of You
September 3, 2002
Copyright 2002 Doug Pretorius

To wherever you are I go by choicest dream
to depths of forest's glen, to heights of snowy skies
I follow your whisper there just steps after you leave
and into another journey I fly
Your smile's softest love
it's always just enough
to carry me by wings through fright
and on through all the nights
Is it as I'd believed
two warm shoulders on which to cry
washed over by autumn's breeze
no place for words or whys
Into this dream of you I lie
to drift to sleep in your eyes
no one will ever be more beautiful to me
so with you I share all that I can feel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-09-03 10:17 PM

"Your smile's softest love
it's always just enough"

...I know someone who should read your words and take a lesson from them....*s
M

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

2 posted 2002-09-04 06:11 PM

Mr Pretorius

Great name (from latin praetorius meaning sheriff or magistrate)

sorry I am not a know-all i just love latin

Beautiful work, enjoyed the read

Zall

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

3 posted 2002-09-05 11:36 AM

beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. God Bless!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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