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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-15 10:03 PM

Puddling

heavy rain
on what
must be
greased glass
slides down
with ease
catching no
edged corners
escaping surface
taking trails to
no brand
of guilt
puddling below

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-08-15 10:32 PM

Sounds like a slippery slope. Watch your footing.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-15 10:57 PM

(sigh) Wow, this is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, your words always hold such wonderful grace! (big hugggsssss) this is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2002-08-15 11:03 PM

frosty the snowman

or love yuh

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

4 posted 2002-08-15 11:48 PM

Slick indeed, I love the rain, and puddles too. Nicely writ.

Essorant

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-08-15 11:51 PM

Nice rain Helen...and the poem is excellent too!

~ hugs from a garden pest

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-08-28 01:25 AM

Helen-
I enjoyed this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

7 posted 2002-08-28 01:28 AM

Very "slick", this one. Nice one, Helen.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

8 posted 2002-08-28 04:08 PM

Curious, what might be in that puddle.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

9 posted 2002-08-28 04:12 PM

And I thought we were talking "golden showers" here you naughty little thing!....Interesting write gal...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-08-28 04:12 PM

enjoyed

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-08-28 08:56 PM

helen - nice one slick, nice one...

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2002-08-29 12:33 PM

Economy of words producing first class imagery.

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

13 posted 2002-08-29 10:09 AM

Wading through all of that is too hard, that's why the boots.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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