Open Poetry #22 |
Dancing In Moonbeams |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“DANCING IN MOONBEAMS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ We walk as one to the meadow, your hand I take this night… Standing together waiting, touching senses with delight… Dark is the forest around us, yet listen, hear the breeze… Sounds of soft guitars playing, slipping notes, through trees… Bluesy chords are the melody, rhythm embraces each soul… Full moon lights the darkness, for two lovers in its control… Dancing in moonbeams, sensuous, hips are becoming, as they sway… It’s moon dancing that we do, a magical setting, our cabaret… ~~~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is really nice, Bill! So romantic and dreamy, I felt I was dancing on a moonbeam. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, you always cast moonbeams, fireflies, and other beautiful serenades in your words! (big hugggsssss) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dancing in moonbeams, sensuous, hips are becoming, as they sway… It’s moon dancing that we do, a magical setting, our cabaret… --------------------------------- This is beautiful Bill... and there's that word again...'magical'!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Bluesy chords are the melody, rhythm embraces each soul… Full moon lights the darkness, for two lovers in its control… Very beautiful...and very romantic, Bill. I truly enjoyed ~ melodic hugs Lyra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bill- Very beautiful, my friend. I enjoyed the romance of this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mr Romance~ So good to see you back posting in full force....I love the blues in this, and the music of love it sofly dances.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, to think of the time I had wasted trying to learn to do the "moon walk"! That time would have been much better spent learning the "moon dance"!--sounds like a lot more fun! |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
beautiful and romantic! thanks for a delightful read! aloha, Cher |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Beautiful and romantic scene Bill Well written! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - how did I miss this one? Very sensual and much enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very beautiful..... love it |
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