Open Poetry #22 |
The Moment Of You |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lost in the moment of you as gentle breezes taunt your ears. As though a kiss were left lingering there for you to hear the words in whisper. Lying in the coolness of blue flowing the length of me as your hands fail to catch the tidal caress. Softly moaning a call of oneness in wait of night’s dance upon the beams of a moon in glow. Till the dawn comes over the hills into the valley of lover’s trace two shall ride the rhythmic flow of waters blue And wait…..as the sound of clinking crystal salutes the birth of trembling ….. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A lovely net of lace, Enjoyed. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM DAMN !!!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you sir Sy... Slick....did I hit a nerve or something??? I must have done it again....(grins) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, such sensual passion fills these silky words, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....*Sighs & Shudders*.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry --very beautiful and romantic! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool write yuh |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Barry, No one writes romance better. Ahhhhh, Wanda |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Such a crystalline embodiment of bliss... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - very nice write... BC |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
BEAUTIFUL..... DeaDiAmore |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
yes I was digging trhu your posts and found this golden moment..wow...wow....wow... Poetry is: |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cher, that was one of my better free style posts....I get in that groove every now and then....thanx for the thoughts, pleased, very pleased that you enjoyed this.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - you romantic you.... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...look who is talking! Coming from you of all....Eh? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Methinks thou hast given me the vapors again! ~ oooooooo ~ EA |
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