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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-08-15 08:43 PM


Lost in the moment of you
as gentle breezes taunt your ears.

As though a kiss were left
lingering there for you to hear
the words in whisper.

Lying in the coolness of
blue flowing the length of me
as your hands fail to catch
the tidal caress.

Softly moaning a call of oneness
in wait of night’s dance upon
the beams of a moon in glow.

Till the dawn comes over the hills
into the valley of lover’s trace
two shall ride the rhythmic flow
of waters blue

And wait…..as the sound of
clinking crystal salutes the
birth of trembling …..


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-15 08:49 PM


Magnus,
A lovely net of lace, Enjoyed.

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2 posted 2002-08-15 08:56 PM


MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM   DAMN !!!!!
Magnus
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3 posted 2002-08-15 09:00 PM


Thank you sir Sy...

Slick....did I hit a nerve or something???
I must have done it again....(grins)

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4 posted 2002-08-15 09:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, such sensual passion fills these silky words, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-15 09:53 PM


....*Sighs & Shudders*....

Martie
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6 posted 2002-08-15 10:27 PM


Barry --very beautiful and romantic!
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7 posted 2002-08-15 10:40 PM


cool write yuh
Wanda
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8 posted 2002-08-15 11:21 PM


Barry, No one writes romance better. Ahhhhh, Wanda
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9 posted 2002-08-16 04:34 PM


Such a crystalline embodiment of bliss...
Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-08-16 05:03 PM


Barry - very nice write...

BC

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11 posted 2002-08-16 05:12 PM


BEAUTIFUL.....

DeaDiAmore

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12 posted 2002-09-16 08:13 PM


yes I was digging trhu your posts and found this golden moment..wow...wow....wow...

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Magnus
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13 posted 2002-09-16 08:20 PM


Cher,  that was one of my better free style
posts....I get in that groove every now and
then....thanx for the thoughts,  pleased,
very pleased that you enjoyed this..

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2002-09-16 08:41 PM


Barry - you romantic you....

BC

Magnus
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15 posted 2002-09-16 08:52 PM


BC...look who is talking!  Coming from you
of all....Eh?

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16 posted 2002-09-16 08:56 PM


Methinks thou hast given me the vapors again!

~ oooooooo ~
EA

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