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Fueled Desire
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Fueled Desire |
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Inuwindow Junior Member
since 2002-08-29
Posts 12 |
Fueled Desire Burning brightly, dancing mysteriously before your eyes, My presence creating warmth, generating a wealth of sighs. A glowing flame igniting carefree illusions on fire, Limb to limb, touching, encompassing a fueled desire. Smores of you, melting, oozing with every sweet sensual bite, Your chocolate obsession creating a tasteful delight. Cradled and layered within a pillow of soft white cover, A measure of intensity, no flame would care to smother. Sweet star of this peaceful sky, your energy is denoting A wish, a dream, an empty castle of smoke filled air, floating, As I leave, and night drifts past our sought after romantic trace. A chill is all that remains of a smoldering hot embrace. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Smores of you, melting, oozing with every sweet sensual bite, Your chocolate obsession creating a tasteful delight." Yummy imagery! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This was so sensually beautiful but got sad in the end, sweet friend, may joy and passion always fill your heart and bring smiles to your dreams, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InUWindow~ 'illusions on fire' Bright sparks emanating from this piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Inuwindow Well done and a delight to read. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
I really enjoyed this very much... |
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