Open Poetry #22 |
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Awaiting The Dawn |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
The night has now turned over, My weary eyes though burning defeat, Their purpose, for though tired, In this twilight I find no sleep. My eyes peel the skyline, Darting to and fro, Undressing the darkness in my mind, Searching for a hint of tomorrow. A very daunting task, I eagerly await the dawn, When the sky removes its mask, For a new day to be born. For the moon serves as a mirror, It reflects thoughts of my heart, So I stare your face for hours, As the moon boldly glares me back. Like the drops of dew to the grass, Countless sentiments adorn my heart, Shimmering in this suspended paradise, Gems of thought that bring you back. Alas, they will have to suffice, In this hiatus of my life, As my heart paces for sunrise, Beating your name as I close my eyes. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*jaw drops to the floor* Woah! Amazing, I don't know what else to say, loved it! Kristen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gabriel, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Gabriel....a very nice poem, love the metaphors.... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"My eyes peel the skyline, Darting to and fro, Undressing the darkness in my mind, Searching for a hint of tomorrow" I love it! Hello, Gabriel, from Kacy, the midnitesun. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Gabriel, this is just lovely, I love it, your words always sparkle with such sunshine and smiles, I love it, always embrace that sunrise, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gabriel, thank youn for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Thank you all so much for your compliments, it is very inspiring and i'm glad my writing has pleased you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gabriel- Beautifully penned and a pleasure to read. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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