Open Poetry #22 |
Splishy-Splashy (Dedication to Bobby Darin, inspired by Magnus) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is a semi-tribute to Bobby Darin, who I admire so very much as an entertainer, yet I've always been saddened by how his political music was ignored after seeing Vietnam and how he lost his audience toward the end of his career and is also on my thoughts and sympathies for him!) Splishy-Splashy By: Noah Eaton 9/2/02 Splish-splash, you were taking a bath Stepped into your dance shoes when you heard the party A reelin' with the feelin' and a'rollin and strollin' All your fans had the dancing bug, they were crowing Then one day you sit by your lonely window Staring at the lonely avenue watching everyone come and go Thinking of the things you used to do Lovers vows, things you didn't do now, memories to help you through You wanted them to see the other half of you You tried to sing a song of freedom but couldn't come through So this is how it goes, that's the way love is You were splish-splashin Now you're wishy-washin If only you had your druthers you'd druther so much more... Eighteen yellow roses came to you to a bouquet You didn't know what to say when they came that day A fathers love without a doubt can never fade away If only for roses that could be the same You sit alone in your Di-Dia one hundred and fifty Speckled in diamond dust, thinking of Sandra Dee All you wanted was to live up to the shoes of Frank Sinatra With the rheumatic fever in your heart, singing with euphoria You wanted them to see the other half of you You tried to sing a song of freedom but couldn't come through So this is how it goes, that's the way love is You were splish-splashin Now you're wishy-washin If only you had your druthers you'd druther so much more... If only everyone could relate to your otherside In Vietnam where your voice for freedom always subsides If only everyone could relate to you now Maybe Mack the Knife would still be back in town... You wanted them to see the other half of you You tried to sing a song of freedom but couldn't come through So this is how it goes, that's the way love is You were splish-splashin Now you're wishy-washin If only you had your druthers you'd druther so much more... Hear the wire from the albatross Bobby White, you're still the boss Make those nightingales wail and whooping cranes insane Bob White, never stop singing, you are born to reign Hear the wire from the albatross Bobby White, you're still the boss Make those nightingales wail and whooping cranes insane Bob White, never stop singing, you are born to reign... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-02-2002 07:51 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Not to shabby Noah...Sing it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Noah...now you're talking my era! I always loved Bobby Darin! Oooh YES!! Good write and love the pic. ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh YES, Noah... Bobby Darin... an old favorite of mine.... all the way back during the ancient days of the sixties... thanks for bringing him back here for us... ~ hugs that rock!!! Lyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Shoot, Noah. I wouldn't be able to write 5 lines about Bobby Darin in poetry, even tho i was a DJ once, and you wrote a wonderfully conhesive bio that should probably be posted on a Bobby D website somewhere. Some superb lines in here, very good ones! ~talk to ya soon~ jeff |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
bobby darin is the singing chameleon, gotta love him! SS |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
NOW I'm smiling! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, read ShadowRider's reply again! It bears repeating. He knows what he's talking about! This was a TT (Terrific Tribute to Mr. D)! Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah ~~ wanna dance? Of my gosh, where are my bobby socks? This is so right out of my era and I am boppin' in my chair. Cool man, cool! Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This was just what I needed today. Great, terrific, incredible. I loved it!! The White Rose~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Great...James |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
NOAH~ You have this Great poetic gene or something because you write so well, and you are so nice everything you reply to people's poems (mine included) is so postive and your poems are positive too, thank you so much for sharing them with everyone and we all love you so much. Feel free to email me at [email protected] Love, Andrea Kruckenberg |
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