Open Poetry #22 |
Oh Yes, I Remember |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I asked him in a whisper if he remembered where we met if he could recall the details of that day in his head yet. He looked a bit confused then he shook his head, "I'm sorry I can't my love" was all that he said. I asked if he remembered the date of our anniversary. He said, "yes I know this one, the day we got married". I was getting worried now afraid to ask him anything. Had he just somehow forgotten everything. I tried one more question just a little one would do. Something I thought he'd know since he missed the first two. I asked when he first loved me, the moment he just knew. He said, "Oh yes, I remember the second I laid eyes on you. WhiteRose The White Rose~ A simple expression of classic beauty. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-02-2002 07:03 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Doesn't matter what he remembers or doesn't. He got the most important question right and seems he has loved you forever! This was exceptionally good. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh yes, Anne... I have to agree with Marti on this one... He got the most important one right... This is a lovely poem. hugs and grins Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, he may have forgotten some of the smaller things but know he could never forget the most important thing, loving you, and that is what make sall other things magical too! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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