Open Poetry #22 |
Vowel by Consonant, inspired by Tabin & Blaise |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vowel by Consonant Lay them out, one by one, Peanut-buttering smooth Line them up, done by done Savor the moment’s truth Like keys of bone and ebony Rhyming timing lining pockets Whip stitching thoughts of harmony Tucked safe in golden lockets Laze their lolling words refined Like golden nuggets dissolving In a treasure chest, re-mined, For now, one heart, resolving That vowel by consonant, it is true Silk-strung words, Poets drape, for you. ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 September 2002 Vowel by Consonant – inspiration by Seymour Tabin “whip stitching thought” – Challenge by Serenity [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-02-2002 01:13 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I love the sounds that flow and weave in this. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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chuckling...hmmm Tabin & Hood sounded like a law firm---Tabin & Blaize sounds like comedy team of ventriloquism...the only question I have? is who gets to sit on WHOSE lap? (oh...and it's almost right now, but I fear my name is spelled B-l-a-i-S-e (me been studying, duh) Wonderful poem, and I thank you, a clever combo and I should have known YOU'D be the one to baste these together! Hugs, you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You know, I think that gleam in Sun's eyes is not a gleam, but is a wicked little look that only she could possibly have... as she cooks up another potion of poetry.. oooops, oh yes, this is a reply to HER poem....hmmmmmmmm.....KJ, I think you and Karen would make one heck of a duo too. with all of these consonants and vowels to play with... SMILING as he departs, stage left..... Mag. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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*came back to add* See? You didn't see sy's lips move ONCE didja? I've been trying to tell ya'll for YEARS I was the DUMMY!!!! "Now Sy? If you could just put your hand, right, um...wait, no...lower...YEAH...THERE!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karilea... That I should be so clever... and on a Holiday Monday to boot!! This is very intricately woven.. and much enjoyed! ~Hugs YOU!~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, You are stiring Randy Dragon, I see some fire in the cave. My goodness but you are brave. PS One wonderful poem. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You are amazing! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just popped in to say I love the addition of the pic!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow, oh my gosh, this is a beautiful sonnet, and a beautiful inspiration I might add that I know Seymour and Cerenity will enjoy! (smiles) This is very intricately woven, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now it is perfect! (somebody's gotta show me how to do that picture thang...but then, I think I get enough trouble! ) Thanks Kari...this was like a present! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so special, Karilea... Like keys of bone and ebony Rhyming timing lining pockets... I wish I could write like that... and I can see the influence of both Sy and Karen in this one... The 3 of you make a great team. ~ hugs and grins Lyra |
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