Open Poetry #22 |
His Uncaring Ways |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
~By Sue~ A once broken heart He managed to break again With all that he did The words that he said Hurt me more than he could know Each time he spoke them His uncaring ways Left me hurting deep inside The day he walked out Those feelings of love I once felt for him so strong Have all gone away To feel love again I will never ever do To be hurt again 9-1-02 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue Your words chilled me to the bone. I hope you find the love you truly deserve. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Sue, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I'm so sorry of your losses but know that true love will find your heart and will care for you! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Don't give up on LOVE, just get THAT man out of your system. There are so many wonderful men out there, you don't need to bother with one that does not know how to give or receive love. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue...Take a trip, buy a gift, meet a friend to share life with. You deserve it...Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I know this will sound trite, but it has certainly been true for me, "It is better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all." With each relationship we have, we learn a bit more about ourself and what we truly need in life to bring us joy. Building a wall around your heart will prevent you from experiencing any love that may come your way. There are no guarantees in life, but love is certainly worth the gamble. I love how you totally expose your raw emotions and bring the reader into your world. Linda |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You may not believe it now, but there are good guys too Sue and I'm sure you'll meet one some day and then you'll fall in love again. Only this time you will get love back too. Even though they're sad, you wrote some beautiful senryus Love, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
sigh.... i've felt this before. all i can say is- bitterness is not better than sadness, and don't let some jerk keep you from sharing your love. smile O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song... |
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