Open Poetry #22 |
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Winter's Day |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States ![]() |
Winter’s Day By Paul Wilson Gray clouds circle overhead sun ushers in a new day Leaves of orange and red set free from trees where gray squirrels now play Time rushes past as we rise from soft warm bed we depart As we open sleepy eyes a new day about to start Frost clinging to window’s pane smoke rising from chimney’s vent Dreams from yesterday now gone dreams of today heaven sent What this day brings…we know not true love, riches, piece of mind We look toward clouds of snow not certain what we will find Embers jump from fires flame sweet smell of pecan and oak Flakes float down as snow now falls lungs breathe aromatic smoke Winter wonderland outside Our breath fogs up windows view Drawing hearts in windows dew Hearts shared with words I love you [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-02-2002 01:44 AM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul This was absolutely stunning with such vivid images and fabulous words of love and romance. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ahhhh!.... That was truly beautiful! Ahhhh!....Ahhhh!....... Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I so enjoyed the toasty feel of your words. I take it you know how to start a fire, and see beyond the burning embers.... I really loved the warmth in this!! |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
suetang... Thank you for taking time to read. I'm not to good on this mushy stuff but I'm trying...Paul Linda...Thank you kind lady for such a sweet reply. Glad you liked it...Paul BluesSerenade...Glad it made you feel all toasty. Thanks for reading. I have started a fire or two, I just have to watch that they don't get out of control. I might burn the house down...Paul |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Oh yeah! This is warmly romantic and stunning by far! Enjoyed it fully ![]() Poetry is: |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
CKSpoet... Thank you for enjoying and your kind reply...Paul |
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