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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-09-01 08:58 PM


In a slow burn
I smile at you
In every move
A revenge planned
Exterior so cool
Fired up insides
Firecracker storage
In the wrong words
You disintegrate

D.Lester Young 9/1/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

© Copyright 2002 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-01 09:24 PM


Strong piece of work here

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2002-09-01 09:25 PM


Oh yea! Awesome poem!

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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