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maggie
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0 posted 2002-09-01 06:43 PM


To my BB from your PG.
We met in chat,
And we talked all night,
Everything was just 'right'.
It was 4:am before you left me,
neither wanted to part.

Remember it? Am I right?
I fell in love with you that very first night.
We met again, later that evening,
we talked a lot and said 'lol' to everything!

We lost touch,but fate brought us together.
It was as thought we'd never parted.
We talked all night again,
things were just the same.

We had a 'meet',
Boy was that a treat!
We both said 'I love you'
And meant it from the heart.

neither had any regrets,
we'd do it all again.
We said.
Both were on cloud 9!

A different tale I now must say,
The price we have to pay?
Tonight you left me,circumstances beyond your control,
That's the trouble,sometimes,with parental control.

I do love you,
I really do,
I know you love me too.
Forever friends.


© Copyright 2002 maggie - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-09-01 06:45 PM


Welcome to Passions, Maggie!  There's always a first time, and isn't it sweet?  Please enjoy Passions in Poetry, and check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-09-01 06:48 PM


Welcome to our humble home...question?? If you're 51 and the chat had to end because of parental control, what's up with that??? LOL
maggie
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3 posted 2002-09-01 06:55 PM


lololol,i see what you mean!!! first poem i have written in my life lol.(maybe last?).
was kids that didnt want it to go any further lol. I'll try and remember your comments ty xx

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4 posted 2002-09-01 08:20 PM


To heck with the kids, do what YOU want!
(Even if they mean well.)
And please promise this wil NOT be the last we read of you.
Welcome to PIPS!

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5 posted 2002-09-01 08:25 PM




Yay!!! (giggles in delight) Hey, what's up with parental controls when you're 51 anyway!!! LOL! We're all so very happy for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a romantic and happy debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Maggie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by yourn lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-01 08:57 PM


I agree..don't let kids run your life..love is too rare and precious to give up once you find it!
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7 posted 2002-09-02 03:16 PM


Go for the gusto and for the gold...
Let within only your hands this hold..

For time is but a tick of one's clock
so get on down to poetry,  let's rock!

Enjoy yourself here...and please do stay..
Us big kids can have our fun too....

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-09-02 03:25 PM


Welcome to Passions, Maggie...
You really mustn't let those kids ruin things.
Parents should be in control.  It sounds like they ruined something wonderful...
I assume they are his because you mentioned that you hadn't been in love before...
So.... call him back, get him back...go after him and don't let those kids get in the way... or settle for friendship...
~ Welcoming hugs from the Ann Landers of chipmunks

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-09-02 04:17 PM


Welcome to Passions, Maggie.  May your love flourish and the kids mind their own business.   Enjoyed much!
Enchantress
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10 posted 2002-09-02 04:20 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS MAGGIE!!
Enjoyed your first post!
I'll be watching for more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

VAS
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11 posted 2002-09-02 04:27 PM


Well, I'm spinning with curiosity, but I'm not going to ask and hope it will either fade or become more clear as we get to know you through your poetry.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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12 posted 2002-09-02 04:49 PM


Welcome to Passions Maggie!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

maggie
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13 posted 2002-09-02 05:27 PM


Thank you all for the wonderful welcome to Passions in Poetry. Thank you also for your comments and words of encouragement. They made me feel lots better!
      Thanks again,
       Maggie xxxx

SimplyGold
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14 posted 2002-09-02 08:32 PM


Welcome to Piptalk. Keep on writing, it will help you to sort out your feelings and by all means have fun!

SimplyGold

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