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Open Poetry #22

Time stand still

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

0 posted 2002-09-01 10:29 AM

Time stand still

Surrender to a peace
Of a heart’s will
Love sings a lullaby
Time stands still

Embrace of lovers
As warm as the sun
Rhythm of two hearts
Synchronize as one

Maybe this is heaven
A peaceful harmony
Nothing feels as whole
As when you’re here with me

Dance to our hearts
Mind please don’t question this
Let me melt into my moment
Of peaceful bliss

Surrender to a peace
Of a heart’s will
Love sings a lullaby
Time stands still

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-09-01 11:18 AM

kat - love does sing a lullabye, and time stands still in it. Very nice write...

BC

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-01 11:22 AM

Very nice write and my favorite stanza:

Maybe this is heaven
                                                            A peaceful harmony
                                                           Nothing feels as whole
                                                         As when you’re here with me

because of the last two lines in it, mostly!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-01 11:31 AM

Softly beautiful....enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

4 posted 2002-09-01 12:14 PM

Thank-you

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