Open Poetry #22 |
Fire In The Sky |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“FIRE IN THE SKY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When the sun was at its highest, I was caressed by the warmth… It touched fondly into my soul, from the depths came my breath… It settled upon the mountain top, embracing all of its majestic being… My minds thoughts were mystified, I felt my heart give in adorning… Upon the river it did kiss tenderly, calming, as one with your gentleness… Fire in the sky beckons, engulfing me, drawing me closer to awesomeness… ~~~~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill Where is this place of awesomeness? It sounds wonderful...so does you poem. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It's somewhere between here, there and over yonder.... Didn't he tell you that.... BC...maybe you should be a painter versus a poet...cause your canvas is always done very well.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Bill! Enjoyed this ever so much. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, you've brought ME closer to "awesomeness" with this beautiful poem! Thank you! Linda |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Bill... What can I say but...AWESOME!!! I loved it!! Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hey Bill, That's a good one, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, this is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, and may the fires always swirl and light the skies of your heart and flicker with smiles to your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC -- There you are on that mountain again. I think you are hiding 'awesomeness' somewhere near the summit. This was beautiful. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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