Open Poetry #21 |
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Fulfillment |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas ![]() |
You make my harnessed soul believe Your muffled waterfall's sputtering chance lands in the drying river inside my heart. Your affection has replinished me your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
I'm so thirsty now. ![]() Nice write! ~Sydney McLean |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kris Wonderful how that happens sometimes! Very well expressed! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) YAY!!! Oh Kristopher, this is soooooo beautiful and so happy, sweet friend, we are all so happy and we wish this true love to blossom in your heart forever! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet firend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
All things come by chance... hope your luck is better than mine Kris... ![]() really enjoyed your word flow here... if I said purdy, would you be offended??? ![]() take care sweets... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I'm so unused to reading hopeful things. ![]() "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You surprised me with the term "affection"... and it was a very pleasant surprise. *S* So many of us think only romantic love can moisten the dry husk our hearts become when left alone... only to find our thirst quenched from unexpected sources. *S* I like this very much. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (06-28-2002 12:04 PM).] |
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