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haiku lifted from "Finch Love Song"
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haiku lifted from "Finch Love Song" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
seeds for two finches café feast on eave in breeze kitten, tongue on move Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Virginia! Great imagery here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I like this. Poor little birdie...so unaware. Aren't we all. Wonderful. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (gasps) Oh no, birdies, fly away, fly away, bad kitty is coming! (smiles) This is a wonderful haiku from your wonderful poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beatiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent Haiku..... I can actually see that tongue in motion. enjoyed Maree |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
are tweetie and sylvester at it again??? This is just to cute, wonderful haiku. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like this one. I've quit putting out birdseed, it made me feel like a murderer. Nan |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, my cats watch from inside the window, lips quivering, tongue and teeth chattering. The birds are safe. ;o} This was a poem with that in mind, yet knowing there are Sylvesters out there.  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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