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mable_sue
Junior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 25
Iowa

0 posted 2002-06-25 11:41 PM

The Release

Two nights ago
the dark began to wail
like a delicate child
raging from a skinned knee.

In His new comicbook
it seemed God
had transformed into
Electricman.
Harsh bolts
began bleeding from His palms.

Seconds passed,
and God bellowed.
He was a roaring lion
announcing his presence
to His kingdom below.

The roaring ceased.
The great superhero
huffed
ceaselessly.
The outside maple
bent at his will.

Piercing and unannounced
came the sterlie tears
pleading with hope
for a lesser wail
and calmer maples.

Lying there,
cushioned by trapped feathers
I heard Him.
I felt his release.
So powerful,
I began to pray
innocently adding
to another wailing eve.

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

1 posted 2002-06-26 12:08 PM

Don,t be afraid, the sun is close at hand and God's smile is just as moving.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-06-26 01:52 AM

Hi, Welcome to passions. Please check your e mail for a special greeting.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-06-26 06:53 AM

Welcome to Passions! Sit back, relax, read, post a poem...I think you're going to like it around here!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-26 08:37 AM

Welcome to Passions!
I'm positive you will love it here!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-06-26 09:13 AM

mable_sue
Welcome and you will love it here.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

6 posted 2002-06-26 11:00 AM

Welcome to PIP. I happen to really enjoy thunder storms. I look forawrd to reading mor of your creations.

INclan

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-06-26 11:48 AM

Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-06-26 06:54 PM

YAY!!! Oh Elizabeth, this is soooooo powerfully striking and filled with His spiritual love, sweet friend, what an electrifying debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Elizabeth, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-06-26 07:13 PM

enjoy your read

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