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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you will find warmth here in my arms and in my heart temperatures rise Inspired by:Oceanic Recollect [snippet 1] Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The seas shall bubble tepid winds to swing the palms summer comes but once |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SWOOOOON!! I love this!! And you KNOW it!  ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Wow, that sure does make me feel warm. thank you Interloper.... Love. Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Your words are like a candle in the night Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Didn't the Rolling Stones have a song out about this?...I can't get no Califaction? |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ Such a beautiful piece should be posted for all to enjoy  Nancy Lee ~ There you've done it now! Another hat size. This is getting plumb expensive. Stetson's don't come cheap, ya know Ladycat ~ It was my distinct pleasure, I assure you Kris ~ And your replies are likened unto a sunset seen from the Cabrillo lighthouse. Toe ~ Yup ... just like the story of the curious cat ... and I know how much you like cats Heeeerrre kitty, kitty, kitty. Niiice kitty Temptress ~ Oh, my... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-25-2002 03:36 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Loper, you know very well senryus and haikus are like potatoe chips...I can't do just one... summer sun singing, singes sear succulently pass the tanning oil |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hmmm, I've read your poem a couple of times and so here I am I've come rite back to let you know that I found your poem2be a most enjoyed read4me... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*warm and fuzzy feelings here* or was that just the Californy heat??? by all the falling women in here I'd say it's most likely you sweets... enjoyed this... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (06-25-2002 04:10 PM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bob hi there Your writing is beautiful, as mum says YOU are incredibly talented. I feel heat moving all through Let it move through you This is absolutely beautiful writing   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ You do these so well. The Queen of Senryu Coco ~ Another visit from my long lost friend. C'mon and post one so I can reply to you devina ~ You are too kind Krissy ~ Hello there. Where have you been hiding? Thanks for the wonderful poetic response Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-25-2002 04:15 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, may love forever compassionately warm your heart with delight and incubate your dreams and make them last forever! (big huggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart you are a writer of dreams song and in this poem you excel, it’s essence spins starlight into glittering showers of divine light. I truly adore the flow of this, it flows as smooth as silk darling heart. As smooth as heat over skin, it sinks into the soul and speaks in desire and warmth. You know I think this is the perfect poem, it is utterly utterly utterly perfect. If the tall Texan is blushing again, it’s your own fault you don’t HAVE to write so well do you darling man? YOU could try to write just once something that didn’t steal the sigh from my soul. I love it utterly utterly utterly excellent  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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