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Summer's last |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Sun-drenched blondes in black skin tight dresses tan and blue-eyed babies in arms shoulders bare and bellies ring as gypsy skirts sway to street guitar black blues sound of a smile where an ancient couple barely able to walk hold each other and dance with the grace of youth love is in the way his hand presses her back ice-cream with fresh fish seaweed and lots of suntan lotion- the sun must set in this ocean even when I’m gone but how ______ 99 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember! You always have given me a  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ 'black blues sound of a smile where an ancient couple barely able to walk hold each other and dance with the grace of youth' Beautiful ... just beautiful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I like it all with the slimmest possible exception taken with ice cream with fish ... yuk  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'm keeping this one, Martie.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Martie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love this vision of sumer you created, this reminded me of my visit a few weeks ago to California and visiting Newport after getting back from Catalina Island and watching people eat fish and chips and ride the carousel! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Once again you mix words that don't seem to mix but do. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I agree with Sy, Martie... If I tried to get those same words to mix, it would be a disaster...but when you do it, its poetry.  ~ lovely flowery hugsLyra |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
you paint so vivid I need my shades to dim the view. great write! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dang, ice cream and fresh fish? That's hard to swallow, but coming from you it's easy to do. Nice work as always Martie~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
 Oops...I seem to have made a blunder. I don't recommend eating ice cream with fresh fish...seperate the times...and make ice cream dessert. |
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