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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
... deleted ... sorry, i only want to post my tripe for a short period to solicit thoughtful responses that may assist me toward improving a given piece. [This message has been edited by wornways (06-11-2002 09:13 AM).] |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
A very interesting introspective rumination. Who is Zahar? |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
ah, zahhar; well, you see, this form of poetry requires that the author refer back to him/her self by name in the final couplet. i use a pseudonym for this, "zahhar". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wornways Interesting, enjoyed the read. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
nicely done, Erin... ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
All things must come to past, for what is there that really lasts. Only the heavens' stars endure and for how long we're not sure. Love to have the head tickled from the inside out. Good job |
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