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A Muse Ponders
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A Muse Ponders |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A Muse Ponders How dark then, is the tunnel When first it was just a rut Then a hollow Leading to cavernous decline Swallowing one whole ~*~ Circle me in and fully know Light of truth’s but candle’s glow ~*~ Caliginous are the thoughts that dwell To pull one in toward fiery hell Clanging resounds that awesome bell And night is but a dream that fell ~*~ Circle me in and draw the tone For in shared light, never stand alone ~*~ I would offer this to you How dark then, is the tunnel When first it was just a rut Then a hollow Leading to cavernous decline Swallowing one whole If you circle round The bonfire’s site And write with fervor Write toward the light For in the distance The flicker dwells And escape is found From certain hell |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soleil~Your muse ponders beautifully today.. Leaves many thoughts for my mind to explore. Thoroughly enjoyed the read! ~hugs~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil I think your muse has been digging deep...but the light certainly flickers brightly in this pondering. Wonderful! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling---this is absolutely witchy! "Caliginous are the thoughts that dwell To pull one in toward fiery hell Clanging resounds that awesome bell And night is but a dream that fell" I like! very much! (forgive my ignorance, but is this a "form"?) admiring the construct here--this could work for me! mind if I save for future reference? OF COURSE YOU DON'T---  er..do ya? |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Enchantress, my dear, enjoy, please, the travels your mind takes... Martie, from the depths spring wells...thank you, my dear, dear friend... Serene One...I delight in your comments...and curtsey...is this a form?....only a form of mind...if it works for you, it works for me  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And night is but a dream that fell ================== Soleil ... IWIHWT!! very very cool poetic ponderance poetess When your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Here you have the question and the answer. Enjoyed. |
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