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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-06-24 02:38 PM

**Grrr I haven't written in a few months, I'm really losing my touch! Hopefully I'll be writing some good stuff again soon.*

I gave my heart away
This time it wasn't stolen
It's filled with your love
Full and near swollen

If you listen real close
You'll hear the pulsating beats
If you turn on the light
You'll see the blush of my cheeks

Let me kiss your lips
Like two kissing fish
It's ok that you take my breath away
My eyes speak whatI want to say

I see in you
The things others cannot see
A light illumating you
An angel sent for me

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2002-06-24 02:42 PM

ah let me tell you, that I didn't wrote too lately, but glad to see your muse is coming back, no you didn't loose your touch, 'cause your words shows it all.

Well done dear friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-06-24 02:42 PM

uh-oh... sounds like somebody has been shot with Cupid's arrow

SWWEEEEET!!!
i like!

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-24 02:49 PM

Hi sweetie!! I love it...and you KNOW it!
Have missed you....Hugs!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2002-06-24 04:01 PM

I do not see any loss ...
I do recognize something gained.

Good to see you back .... like the smile too!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-24 05:25 PM

(smiles) Oh Joanna, I love you, I love you, I love you! (kisses) And I will give my heart to you, for you are the girl I want and the girl I want to love! (kisses) I sure hope either next month or in August you can meet me or if that doesn't work out, I can meet you, I dream of that ore than anything in the whole wide world! (hugs and kisses) I LOVE YOU!!!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-06-24 06:59 PM

enjoy

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-06-24 07:01 PM

Joanna, there is nothing here in this poem
that is not just fine as it is...So...just
keep write on writing.... (intentional
slip)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-06-24 07:05 PM

Oh yes...a wonderful romantic write...James

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