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Open Poetry #21

Obsession (3 or 4 pieces)

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2002-06-24 12:56 PM

I think about you morning,noon, and night
I dream about you
Hope about you
Wish about you
Pray about you
I want to touch, taste, and smell you
I want you near me
I want to be entranced by you
I want to know you
I want to know what you are thinking
I want

You

    You

        You

Am I obsessing again?

Love,
Ladycat

Don't ask me where this series came from I have no clue.  I just thought that it was something interesting that came flying out of my head.

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-06-24 02:39 PM

a fast piece. thoughts flying across the page. i like the spontaniety.

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-06-24 03:27 PM

GR8 piece.
I loved it

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-24 07:30 PM

(smiles) Oh Vynette, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I have noticed each part of the series sounding happier, this is lovely! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vynette, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-06-24 09:55 PM

yep, gotta agree with Krishankins. I liked it. and to your critiques message, I just wanted to say that many of us who have been writing for that long are still asking for that gentleness dear Lady...each day is a learning thing....*soft smiles*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-06-24 10:22 PM

Some of the best poems are ones that seem to have come fully formed from the poet's brain.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-06-24 10:48 PM

I love a woman who says it like it is....nice going, Catlady

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