Open Poetry #21 |
. . . tasting your sweetness . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'm watching you move each sensual step closer to melt in my arms ~*~ sink into my arms lift your chin to offer lips tasting your sweetness ~*~ my ears hear your sighs my heart melts upon your touch I am yours my love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Loper's back...about time! Welcome home, Texas.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmmmelting.... you are so good at this, you make my thoughts wander... AND wonder! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
your fingers trace me as your eyes drink in my curves you ask without words. *I am so glad you're back!* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy welcome back I’ve missed you, your lines have a way of wafting over my heart like a song that I remember but feel is new. The familiarity of trust but the freshness of unique, do I love this you know I utterly utterly do. There is within your writing something superior, something that makes it finer and better crafted that makes it incredibly special. Yessssss it’s superb and I adore it Truly this is exceptional I love it utterly utterly. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ At least for a week, huh? serenity ~ Hmmmmmmmmmmelting? Thanx Nancy Lee ~ Thank you for the wonderful response piece Howse Chris? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magnificent Marsha ~ You DO know how to make me feel soooooooooo good Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You just get more romantic every day. Wow, this is beautiful. Sandra |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I love this!!! It's so beautiful....and sweet...and romantic...and perfect..*sigh* I loved it! Tai |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Smiles here .... So gently you seduce ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whoooohoooooo do I love these sighs ... oh yesssss I do..... ooops think im swooning here Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sandra ~ Really? Well, I can't wait for next year, then LilTai ~ I think your first visit to my work. Welcome and thank you for a most heart melting reply Marge ~ Are you smiling because I seduce or as I seduce? Charisma ~ W8 ... I'll catch you, darlin' Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Interloper You write romance well....such sensual love words here, I enjoyed reading! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Martie ~ Thanks for the read and the wonderful words Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sprinkled with such sweetness and sugar-coated with such smiles! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Noah ~ What would I do without your smiles? I don't want to find out Thank you, friend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
oh how sooooooooo tender and precious this gem is Interloper it IS soooooooooo soooooooo sweeeeeeeet! Exquisite writing... SmilesNhugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You do sensual soo good... We need to see more of this!!! *I do believe that spring has brought *love into the air* at PIP... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the angle of her chin.... Your poetry is always so tightly knitted. Really nice~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really like the title...and the content...James |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
LOPER!!!! This is great as usual!!! Short and sweet!! Texans unite.. lol.. Take care and keep wirting that good stuff for me to read.. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Coco ~ Hellllllllo, girl it is so good to see you back in my replies. I miss you. devina ~ Thank you so very much. Since I do almost nothing but "sensual" writes your request will not be hard to fill BluesSeranade ~ Who told you I knitted? Wait 'til I get my hands on 'em. It was probably Sven or Bob! They both teach knitting and crocheting on the internet. Ov corse, it could have been Balladeer ... we were in the same class together. James ~ I'm glad you liked it my friend Ladycat ~ Let's hear it for the Lone Star poets! Thanx for the 1derful reply Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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