Open Poetry #21 |
Rosy Love |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Under a soft rose tinted lamp you tumbled me upon the bed my rosey comforter beneath your mouth crushing my lips of red Rose petal lay around the room and candles scented rosily Your tenderness is sweetly real the way our love shall always be. (Just a fantasy, alas) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon But a lovely fantasy. Enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sandra~ Very loving fantasy.....it should always be this way....hugsssss Lauren~ Its been a long road |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
can reality be ever so far away then? enjoyed, thank you Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Rosily Romantic....Just the way a fantasy should be. So sweet I can smell the roses in the air! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly romantic Sandra. Enjoyed the read...and the fantasy. ~Hugs~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I like your fantasies Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And yet this fantasy could be just a kiss away...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful fantasy that could become a reality easily for one with such a beautiful heart and soul as yours Sandra. Hugs to you. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dream bigger. . . make the reality. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Sandra, this may just be a fantasy for now, but I know with all my heart love will be yours to hold forever and you'll find all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is a lovely dream, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
And a beautiful one at that Sandra…and one that will come true one day. For the softest hearts cannot stay alone for long. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hmmm... thought he. What wonderous heart beats beneath her breast, and does she like pizza? ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh but such a lovely fantasy, Sandra... and so beautifully written. ~ fantasy hugs Lyra |
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Stapelton Junior Member
since 2002-04-16
Posts 13Canada |
one that will come true just give it time. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ *smiles* here .... lovely thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Now that's my kind of fantasy! Nice images in these two verses........I can you slowly floating through the air in slow motion and then landing on the bed with the comforter billowing up all around you from the weight of your n...d body....Yep great fantasy! He he have a nice day! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Cat, What a great write, have not been on this puter in a great while, hope all went well, this half still going some how, sending hugs. Love, Cerenity |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautifulllllllllllll expression... Thank you very much4this splendid read2nite... Smiles2uSweetie... *~coco~* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
...and sometimes, they come true. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a wonderful fantasy to have. Nw, if only we could make these fantasies come true. *BIG HUGS* |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
quietly romantic and then deeply romantic - thanks I liked it lots - Paul |
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