Open Poetry #21 |
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Lonely Heart |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Tonight, I see the frost on your breath...like halos of soft endearment.So near, yet so far away from me.My heart echos empty air where arm's embrace should be.My soul misses everything that speaks of you....the way you walk, the way you talk.Even the soft glow of written words, does not dispel these shadows, these images.I am emptied of all delight; for your nearness is all I seek,How does it feel to dance in the light with you?How do I erase the barriers of empty space? My heart is lonely, tonight.My soul seeks the solace of one deep kiss, one embrace of love and light. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ivy, this is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but I know with all my heart you are a very loving person and I know you will find all the kisses your heart desires and true joy is destined to be yours forever! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, keep your chin up, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very poignant write, but very very beautiful. Well done. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartwrenched but beautiful penned....wonderful done (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy, writing as you do, I do believe you will find that which you desire... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Nearness is all I seek." This poem has has lovely choice lines...James |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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