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Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

0 posted 2002-06-23 10:40 PM

Sunday comes in circles now.
Half wasted in a jar.
The other half the pretty things
The knowing not so far.
Time be measured in a blade.
Green and growing there.
Where Sunday come so frequently
These paths exhibit wear.
And I the lonely one to keep
score and where we head.
Shall breathe a song, live a dance
Before I meet the dead.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-06-23 10:58 PM

Where Sunday come so frequently
These paths exhibit wear.
And I the lonely one to keep
score and where we head.
Shall breathe a song, live a dance
Before I meet the dead.
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this is a haunting, lovely write Lady A ...
this whispers to me of B-Shelly and Will Shakes with its phrasing and meter...tis not often you rhyme...but oh how well you do when you do.
Good to read you my girlie-girl
mothyme

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through,
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking,
I passed that point long ago.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-23 11:05 PM

(smiles) Wow, I just love the way you describe aspects of life with perfect artistic interpretation, sweet friend, this is wonderful and comes to show the wonderful talent you have, always live on and keep on dancing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alicia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-23-2002 11:05 PM).]

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-06-24 12:01 PM

hurry, hurry, write another
it's too good not to have company from another one of your lettered portraits.

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (06-24-2002 12:02 AM).]

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-06-24 12:08 PM

life goes from one Sunday to the next, and much of us just live on th weekends..that's the pity of thos circle of life..neat poem, welcome to Passions

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

5 posted 2002-06-24 12:57 PM

great poem.

"I think I go home."
(Garbo)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-06-24 09:20 AM

she rhymes!

Hey, miss A! You trying to steal my JOB? heh heh...

I adore this...the seemingly simplicity of it lends to the message and certainly emphasizes the point. Yer too cool.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-06-25 11:50 PM

Once again, my friend, you have blown me away. Wonderful!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

8 posted 2002-06-25 11:53 PM

loved it.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2002-06-26 12:00 PM

I enjoyed the read Alicia...
Thanx4sharing...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-06-26 04:50 PM

I see that you're reaching out into new things. . . that's good. . .

peace my friend. . .always. . .

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