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Strawberry Of Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Strawberry Of Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ 𠤤¤¤ 礤¤•••¤¤¤ç çStrawberry moonç across• a Milky Way• sky Spooning • with • moonbeams upon • a whip • of • cream • sigh Shortcake • of dreams • piled so high scrumptious • delight in • the night • sky Melt-in-the-mind•flavor so very•appealing Strawberry • moon • so • very • revealing Once • in yearly phasing • she will • come nothing • in this •June sky• left • undone Celestial• dessert in crystal • of dish might • be time to make a • wish Strawberry moon come again •Creme dela Creme• ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-23-2002 10:22 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge!! This is so yummy!! I love it and it's a perfect strawberry shape! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I am way beyond words impressed with your words and the shape and huge amount of time invested to do this! My friend, thanks for dragging me along this weekend and forcing me to figure out what I never thought I could do! I am so grateful. Now, can I have a day off to rest? Pretty Please...LOL!!!! Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is just delightful!! I am now wild for strawberry shortcake! Beautiful job! Betty Lou Hebert |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How sweet it is.. Another beautiful moon, from your pen. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ Tweaked it a little after you saw it ... forgot about the 'two-spaces rule' Ron shared with me~ Thanks gal~ Marti~ Hey ... your turn to buy the EXCEDRIN~ Girlie ... you're a trooper to have kept at the 'task at hand' ... ~ Good on you~ Thankee so much for the good company~ BettyLou~ YOU and ME both !! Thanks gal~ CatalinaMoon~ Ahhhhhh .... June is the month of the Strawberry Moon .. she demanded to be written~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~This, is delightful and looks so incredible. Wow Marge. I've got a bowl of fresh ones next to me that I just sliced, if only I could fix 'em up the way that you do. *Peace. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are not playing fair....It is almost 11 P.M. here, and now I am hungry for strawberry shortcake....Darn.... Marge this is splendiforous.... Only you can make something like this.. and make the words so perfect... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alicia~ Hey ... we're all coming over for some strawberry shortcake ! YUMMY ~ Thanks hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Strawberry shortcake at Alicia's~ Hurry ! You bring the whipped cream !!  Thankee fella~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart and describer of the moon in such a delicious way. You know Kent and particularly where I am is the epicentre of strawberries. The folks at Wimbledon which is synonymous with center court tennis and strawberries, wouldn’t dream of getting their very pricey strawberries from anywhere else than here. You know darling girl that I adore your creativity and love the way you’ve created this showstopper. The words are a dream and the shape is an utterly perfect delight. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the eathquake wind and fire Oh [This message has been edited by Marsha (06-23-2002 10:56 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...Delicious poem and so well-written, as always. Very innovative and creative. ***IvyRose |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is so enticing that I wish I could pluck it! mycafe |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
I love this! Tasted great. "I think I go home." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow ... what a perfect image, and even better execution. This is awesome, deer-y person! Much appreciated by this Squirrel! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge....uumm uummm delicious! Love it all the way around! Now don't get the wrong idea but let's get the whipped cream out!!!! I know there's a song in there ..."Strawberry Moon!" It just gets the creative juices flowing!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is just delicious Marge. Man, I'm gonna have to run to the lil shop up the road and get me some......delectable read Marge. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yummy strawberries, sounds wonderful to me...in fact sounds delicious to me..  love the way you present us one delight picture. thanks for sharing Marge ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Save me a portion Sweet.  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Just when I think you can't get any more creative girlie!!! This was scruptiously FABULOUS!!! Love the presentation and yummy in-be-tween!!!  Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yummmmmmmmm!! delectable! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Glad you like it ... scrumpdelicious it is ! We do some mighty fine strawberries here in Florida at Plant City too ! Darn it ... not the prime season come September !!! Thankee hon~ IvyRose~ Thank you so much ... I make a pretty mean shortcake too~  MyCafe~ *grinning* at your 'pluck'~ Thank you so much~ AccordianMaid~ Thanks for stopping in for a taste~ BSquirrel~ LOL .. thanks fella~ Didn't I see you at the 'whipped-cream' counter ? ETHome~ 'Wrong idea' ??? Tee-Hee ... I think I got the right idea~ Hey ... I also thought it was song material ... run with it sweetie~ Thanks doll~ GentleSpirit~ Seems I've sent everyone scurrying to the closest strawberry stand~ Hmmmmmm, poets and strawberries just kind of seem to go together, eh ? Charisma~ Dearie ... you are simply a joy to have at the tasting booth~ Thanks sweetie~ Seymour~ ALWAYS sweetie~  Devina~ LOL ... can you tell I've been munching strawberries AND checking out that 'Strawberry Moon' tonight ! Thankee gal~ Doreen~ LOL ... oh ... you like that whipped-cream thang too ? *The June moon is also known as the Strawberry Moon which gave me the idea for this piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I will be back in just a second....I am going to get my spoon. Thei one is too good just to read. *S* Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I should send you money for all the pleasure I get from reading you---and now? I'm hungry too...two faves of mine in one post... and someday? I'm gonna figure out how you do this stuff! miss ya mom! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge! Am I too late to have a bite?? I thought I replied to this earlier..but I went searching for the meaning of Strawberry Moon and forgot, til now, to come back. I didn't know the moon had a different name every month..now I do, because of you. |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
Indeed a tastey treat, and with sweet presentation ... made me hungry for more!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dan~ You tickled me with your reply~ *giggles* Serenity~ Well honey child ... need me to send you my mailing address ????? All donations greatly accepted and cashed immediately~ Thanks sweetie .... MartieSis~ Saved you a BIG bite, sugar~ I just LOVE knowing I sent you searching~ What a neat happening~ And actually several cultures around the world have 'monthly names' for the moon .. interesting, eh ? That's how I stumbled into the 'inspire' for this little piece ... told Bill, "I just HAVE to write it !" *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ShadowedInnerSense~ Whoopsie .... I musta been having a second-helping when you sneaked into the kitchen~ Thanks so much ... Welcome to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-24-2002 04:44 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is fantastic! I love the way you wrote this. Oh yeah, I love strawberry shortcake, too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ Dang ... we sure got a lot of hungry poets here~ Thank you for coming in for a snack sweetie~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BillyBull Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 15DeLand,Fl. USA |
Hey Sis, Even though I got your email with this yesterday I just opened it tonight after getting home from work and was sitting here eating strawberries when I came to the site to check out comments. ESP maybe? Me |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Marge, you do these soooo well!!!! I am in awe... what a delight... looks tasty enough to eat... Ow!!! just chipped a tooth on the monitor....LOL... just kidding. Well Done!!! Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Ohhhh, You make me sooo..... Hungry.... Thank you for the delightful read. I'm going to make something with strawberries now. The strawberry design was creative too.. I loved it. Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyBrother~ LOL .. and I'll just bet you were having some of that old-man ice cream with it~ Thanks for being YOU~  MagicMystery~ LOL ... I think I heard you crunching and munching~ Thanks gal~ LadyCat~ Good to see you join the Hungry Poets Society~ Got lots of honorary members here ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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