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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-06-23 10:00 PM

Dark Hearts

With in the walls of this transparent existence
Hidden behind crystal shards of broken dreams
Nothing here nor there is, as it seems

There is pain inside the love that is felt here
Hopes and dreams shattered as love goes extreme
As a dark heart causes yet another silent scream

Ashes of a once sweet love scattered
By the winds of hate to the far corners of creation
Making her react out of desperation

Now she has withdrawn
Looking for somewhere to hide
From the dark hearted love that abides

I hope one day that this sweet lady
Finds herself in a heartfelt love
The kind that is sent from above

Maybe one day the ones with a dark heart
Will learn that violence is not a way
Of showing love on any day

alan
06/22/02

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-06-23 10:10 PM

Nice to see you here again Alan!
I think the last stanza sums it all up perfectly.
Good write!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-23 10:30 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Alan, this is so well said and so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to the may abused in relationships and I wish somehow though the scars will always be there that true love can overshadow the tears! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-06-23 10:50 PM

No Alan, there is not a place for treating
any woman cruelly...Whether it be physically
or just emotionally. They too...are human
beings just like the rest of us...and deserve
to be treated respectfully, as we would
want ourselves to be treated...

Thanx for this...

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-06-23 10:54 PM

Alan...A timely and excellent poem. Speaks with power for those who often have no voice. ***Ivy Rose

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