Open Poetry #21 |
The Die is Cast (Story Poem---Part THREE) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The King in rage did vow to find and hang the knight of prize who took a Queen of age to twist the mind in flow of clear in babbling brook To arms he called of all the land a thousand marched to victory For the Queen was his chosen hand and fear to him in prize not free Yet in the midst of warriors strong an ear did hear the whispered call and ‘pon the steed a ride of long to dark knight till a moon of fall The knight did grin as word did reach an ear in whisper of the plot while pleasure he took from the breech and vowed to kill what king had wrought The wine of lips and soft of skin of queen to one did spur the fight as lovers lived in stolen sin and warriors rode to find a knight A battle nigh would bring the cry of hundreds in the wake of war as maidens fair would swoon and sigh in wish of one, the name Karbar |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, An enjoyable read I'll have to find the first two. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy....tsk, tsk, tsk Ya took thuh risk read the last first and now you thirst tsk tsk tsk Now Ya gone and dun it.... Thanx Sy...Wish I knew how to prevent reading the last first...etc.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! This is excellent, sweet friend, among the classic virtues of chivalry revenge was always a common hand aside from the charities of largesse and prowess and you speak of its positive worth so well in this series! (sigh) This is most excellent, sweet friend, I much enjoy these deep provoking stories, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at the comments... sighing at the write... keep it up! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Sun...so you went and dun it too.... You don't read the end of the book first... Unless it is some foreign language.... Part TWO comes before part THREE....??? Thanx for the review... OOOOPS...appears there has been an error on my part. Most humble apologies offered by this humble knight. Seems my eyes need aid of corrective lenses... Cya... [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-23-2002 08:39 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
HA! Sending the corrective lenses...twice! ROTF.... No, I never DO read the last, first...I WANT the SURPRISE! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart, now I’m going to have to go back and read the others. If I didn’t adore your writing I wouldn’t but you devil that you are ……… I’ll forgive you, but one day dearest boy I shall exact my revenge I shall return after I’ve read the others to tell you exactly what I think of it And I expect the words utterly love it will arise somehow don’t you? superb writing and of course I love it utterly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Mushy....I have been sitting here for what seems like days, waiting for the other comments.... What's wrong darling girl? Is the heat of my poetry too much for you? Are you jealous of the words, or what? Thanx little lady...enjoy your words, always do... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart, Part three the final part my friend And what a wonder what an end I didn’t read all of part three I saved the surprise, a discovery The queen with her lover waits For the mists of hope to show her fates Will she ever know how or why? Her chosen Knight will fall and die Or will she find that in the end A simple plea will her sin amend A magnificent story I enjoyed it all And now my friend I hear your poetry call I love it love it love it and now you’ll pay, remember Nemesis? Watch out watch out there’s a Mushy about. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As three are read by the eye a fourth is saved for the cry For Karbar is the chosen Knight who waits to win a lover's fight I wait till 'morrow to post again and cause the sorrow to begin Yet only I do know the fate and darling girl, It's gettin' late The end is nigh I will you say but till that time, you'll just stay in wait of what I give to thee in want of what is MINE, you see! [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-23-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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