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Open Poetry #21
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jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
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North Richland HillsTx
0 posted 2002-06-23 10:28 AM


My body’s buoyancy over comes gravity
As I lay drifting in the pool
Facing up to heaven
Viewing the stars above.
They tinkle and sparkle and bid me hello
The moon peaks out of its blanket of stratus.
Sounds are muffled, stillness becomes
I feel your hand so soft
You lead me across the pool.
Calming thoughts are close
Meditation so serene
I feel if you were to let go
I would float up past the stars
And dance around the moon.
© Copyright 2002 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2002-06-23 05:57 PM

Hmmmm I really love the feel of this.

Wonderful writing Jennirey
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-06-23 06:18 PM

Very nice...James
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