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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-06-23 07:59 AM

The day was hot and sultry
The air was damp and still
The savage beast
With claws unsheathed
Moved swiftly for the kill

The wind was raised in whisper
The birdcalls ceased to trill
The victim there
Though unaware
Was certain of the ill

The sun it shone in gleaming
Above the treetops tall
The prey had moved
By silence proved
Escaped the captors thrall

The day was hot and sultry
And sweat was trapped in fall
As captor's prey
Moved swift that day
And lost the flight in stall

With fluttered wing of wandering
Made brighter by the day
The victim there
Who did not care
Then swiftly flew away

The predator distaining
Inclined his head away
The game was done
He'd had his fun
The hunter lost the prey

The day was hot and sultry
As wings flew far from earth
On coloured wing
Flies freedom's ring
While kitten showed his worth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-23 08:08 AM

Excellent! A very large grin on this Puss!

SiO2
Junior Member

since 2002-06-05

Posts 24
New Zealand

2 posted 2002-06-23 09:02 AM

Only seven left! Nice twist well written!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-23 09:12 AM

The day was hot and sultry
As wings flew far from earth
On coloured wing
Flies freedom's ring
While kitten showed his worth
--------------------------------
Wonderful Kethry!!
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-06-23 09:20 AM

Keth,
An excellent write, this is a keeper.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-06-23 04:39 PM

Keth....your writing is astoundingly good.
You are getting into a wonderful groove...
Keep going....I love the cadence and rhyme
of these...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-06-23 07:00 PM

Keth darling sister of my heart, and my soul’s voice, this was and is utterly utterly perfect. I truly was captivated by this and the ending was utterly perfect. You know I love this don’t you darling mmmm of course you do. You mix sunlight and shadow so well I’m always awed by your skill. As for the rhythm of this and its form it is absolutely fabulous

Anyway this is another utterly utterly perfectly penned poem from you and I absolutely love it. Thank you for lifting the gloom and muddle that so often clouds the night, truly exceptional. And adding life to my life

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-06-23 07:15 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kethry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your writing is growing so very much and we are all so proud of you! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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