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Take Not My Heart
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Take Not My Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart OH MY WORD this is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, and the content utterly utterly beautiful. You know how I rhapsodise over your writing, well this time I can’t give you plaudits enough. I know I’d never be able to write even half as well as this but I really wish I could. I’m always telling you that you are in my top five, and you are, this is perfectly lovely. I love it utterly utterly utterly Superb writing Exquisite utterly absolutely perfect I love it utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Marge!! Talk about 'picture perfect'!! This one stopped me in my tracks.... Wonderful write with an absolutely perfect pic. ~HUgs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Wonderful write as always. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The eyes say everything about this poem... A perfect pic for the message... Thank You Marge for your always excellent poetry and imagery... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ooooooo yes~ Beautiful picture to compliment your words. Look but don't touch, and come a little closer. Just my take! Nice one Marge~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Made of glass...and she will break if you touch her.... Very beautifully done, Marge...  ~ a heart full of hugsLyra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MargeSweetie, like I mentioned2u earlier this is a treasure... Muaah on cheekz4this most splendid poem... *~coco~* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Wow, I wasn't prepared for reading this, knocked at my door. Excellent piece Marge, and a keeper for me. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge your poetic artistry is excelling once again....wonderful blend of verse and picture.....you're soooooo [email protected]! |
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Stryder Junior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 29Silent Hill |
Marge, you certainly have an "artistic" vision...that's for sure.  -Stryder |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful Marge...James |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Not your usual vivacious and bouncy spirit, but the point well taken in a superbly written piece. Enjoyed it, Melton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, I just love this poem. It fits me perfect. This is just the way I feel. And, the picture is perfect for this poem. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Utterly stunning Marge... don't I know this one all too well??? Of course you know...  *sigh to the lost weeping poetry of mine* and onward within my happy thoughts...  enjoyed this mums... ~D love... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ I know you'd be interested to know that I 'found' that graphic nine months ago to the day~ Wow ... that's a loooooong 'simmer'~ Thank you for enjoying it so~ Enchantress~ Her sultry look of vunerability seemed to have a 'tough interior' to me .. I sure hope I captured it~ Thank you gal~ Seymour~ Thank you darling man~ Magnus~ I like knowing that you 'saw' what I saw~ Thank you~ BluesSerenade~ Yes ! The fragility of the exterior often reveals an interior that is 'off-limits'~ Thanks sweetie~ Lyra~ I think you may be right ... she just seemed soooooo shattered already~ Thanks so much~ CoCoBaci~ Thanks sweet gal .. your e-mail was most welcomed on this one~ *HUGS* Charisma~ So glad you answered 'the knock'~ Big hugs sent your way dear friend~ ETHome~ Aw, shucks ... just penning 'em the way they 'feel'~ (Looking for a link you sent me ... I'll get there yet !) Thanks poet friend~ Stryder~ Thank you so much ... the ink often sees what the flow of thought should be~ I dip the quill and etch the color of ink offered to me by the muses of my keep~ JamesMichael~ Thank you sweetie~ Melton~ So good to see you ~ Oh ... I'm 'bouncy' and 'vivacious' .. just caught my trampoline in a different mode~  SusieQ~ You know ... I wish it didn't fit you so well~ Thanks sweetie~ Devina~ Aaron found the 'key' ...~ Love you gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the only words I can come up with sometimes when I read you lady, is just beautiful......this is stunning Marge. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: You always find the "heart" of your subject, no matter what you write about. This is stunning! Betty Lou Hebert |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Deer-like person, This is sooo good. It deserves to be somebody's desktop. Maybe even mine! Squirrely Guy She said burn ... together. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Cool!!!! mycafe |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You wrote the picture so well...seems like the words came straight from her. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ You got any idea how much I respect you ? Bunches ! Thank you so much~ BettyLou~ Such a lovely thing to say ... thank you dear lady~ BSQuirrel~ Now that is one heck of a compliment .. and a 'first' for this lady~ *Huggers* to you sweetie~  MyCafe~ Thank you dear~ Martie~ ... I think she chose the words for me to ink~Thank you sweet Sis~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That will certainly shut someone's water off! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Forewarned is forewarned ... LOL @ you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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