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My greatest wish fulfilled
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My greatest wish fulfilled |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands 
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You know I'm riding a scooter, don't walk that good anymore I use it for my outings, driving 'round in nature galore It has to be uploaded, by electricity that is And riding towards Titia, that was my greatest wish But it has limited mileage, so I wasn't sure at all If I could make it all the way, before we flat down fall First I drove by car the path, to see how far I had to go And that just made me happy, it was possible you know Fifteen miles, it could be close, I thought to give it a try It would take at least a hour, these things they just don't fly I did'nt call her in advance, just packed my things and went And hoped that for this daring trip a guardian angel was send I roamed the countryroads, seeing beautiful things Enjoying nature's glory, like flying on angel's wings And I made it to Titia's place, but she wasn't home at all Forgot that she was working, stupid I didn't call So I had to return again, without knowing if I could make it For should it stop and go no more, then I could really shake it I finally made it to my home and I was so happy by then I've been a little afraid though, but I sure will do it again Life on the internet begins at...90! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, dear Muys, your poetry is like a breath of fresh air! This is wonderful....I have a picture of the entire trip in my mind. I'm sure it was a wonderful ride in that beautiful countryside  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Muys darling girl this is delightful and so loving, I love it, the adventure and the risk, its amazing what we can do if we want to. This as beautifully written and such a lovely flow, the rhyme was fabulous too. You are a lovely mum and Tita is a fabulous daughter, you are lucky to have each other, the love you share simply flows through this delightful poem. Very well written I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Muys!! This is SO cute! But...if it is a true story which I have no doubt it is... you must be careful and maybe call Titia first! I would hate to think of you stuck on the side of the road. Excellent write!! ~Big Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Muys, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your daughter must have enjoyed your company, I'm sorry she was busy at that time but I know she would always love to see your smile! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Muys, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Muys~ You dear sweet little cutie pie~ That is delightfully poetic .... quite the adventuresome one you are~ Sure glad you invite your guardian angel along for a ride ...~  Love you dear lady~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are such a great KID, Muys.... Isn't it more fun to stay a kid then to grow up and be stuffy? YOU are definitely not stuffy!!!!!!! Titia is so lucky to have you for a Mom. ~ young at heart hugsLyra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
What an adventure, could see Nature's Glory through your words. Thanks for sharing your delighted poem Muys. Charisma |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Don't do that again without warning me you're coming you hear! But then... you're as stubborn as I am Mommy Muys, or did I get that from you  HUGS TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Muys A wonderful adventure and a wonderful write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's our Lady Muys...a gal on the go no matter if anyone is home or not! If you have cellular mobile phones in your neck of the woods, I would encourage you to get one, just in case...  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ha I just heard it took her three hours!!! to get to my place You're some Mom, you really are Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh no, Muys! This sounds like something I would do. Sure am glad you took your gardian angel with you. You be careful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Very sweet and lovely indeed, Muys! mycafe |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is just wonderful writing! I so enjoyed! If you are this adventurous at age 91, what were you like in your younger days? I hope you'll write about those days. Hugs, Deb |
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