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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Falling think of the rain how it never ends always falling somewhere ever transforming the hardest rock from crystals into powders into the tint of a flowing river think of the tears how they never end always falling someone is transforming the hardened heart from bitter pain into relief through fresh rinsed eyes into a clearer view © 062202 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at the alchemy of the analogy here, "e"--a favorite theme of mine, as well. Enjoyed.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One never knows what's going to hit bottom... well done, Krawdad...you wrote a thinker... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krawdad~ Very nicely said~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully penned poet sir! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh E.J, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it comes to show that even while so much pain can penetrate our hearts, it can't killus and we only heal and grow stronger and richer in love! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad Loved the comparison here! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
so nice to see you writing again...helen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
someone is transforming the hardened heart from bitter pain into relief through fresh rinsed eyes into a clearer view ============================================ very neat...! i've missed not being here to read all these wonderful poetic words!! much enjoyed, my friend hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thanks all for your comments. Glad you enjoyed. |
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Syneq Junior Member
since 2002-07-28
Posts 40 |
Rain and tears are the same release from different source. Lovely work ~Syneq Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight. |
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