Open Poetry #21 |
summer soul (copula) |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
summer soul stitch lost friend ships made of pape r thin wreck collection summer soul stitch tap(es tree swing me dad dy from your limb er can’t lasti city lights befall the crowd play ball calls boys of want some her summer soul stitch in time saves 9 months dead for not some are glad she hear [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-21-2002 05:15 AM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okies..between you and Sven, I'm gaining a great appreciation for this kind of work. Enjoyed the read, Walt. Its strange to think how much you changed your writing on here, but still wonderful. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
it's different but I like it, it's a bit like reading with one eye closed and your finger on the enter key. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Sort of like an e.e.cummings poem.I liked the rhythm. paladin |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Like this a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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